Critique: We discussed a lot during crit but I will go over a bit of a summary :) I really like the atmosphere you've created here. From the sky down to the lighting, there is a great consistency of style and medieval fantasy elements across the level. The fog and mountains are an excellent touch. The large central mountain in the distance shows very good command of scale and leading the players eye. The forest creates a natural feeling barrier for the central location. Pushing this project to the next level would be adding path element with meshes such as rocks or grasses, or even animals that led the player in certain directions (This can be accomplished fairly easily through the use of splines and animation blueprints). I would also look for higher quality materials for the grass and lake and add more diversity in the foliage. Use resources like Artstation and Pinterest as reference when polishing up levels. Here's an example of what I would look up if I were working on a forest https://www.artstation.com/search?q=forest&sort_by=relevance Overall this is a strong first VR project. Grade: A-
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Critique:
We discussed a lot during crit but I will go over a bit of a summary :) I really like the atmosphere you've created here. From the sky down to the lighting, there is a great consistency of style and medieval fantasy elements across the level. The fog and mountains are an excellent touch. The large central mountain in the distance shows very good command of scale and leading the players eye. The forest creates a natural feeling barrier for the central location. Pushing this project to the next level would be adding path element with meshes such as rocks or grasses, or even animals that led the player in certain directions (This can be accomplished fairly easily through the use of splines and animation blueprints). I would also look for higher quality materials for the grass and lake and add more diversity in the foliage. Use resources like Artstation and Pinterest as reference when polishing up levels. Here's an example of what I would look up if I were working on a forest https://www.artstation.com/search?q=forest&sort_by=relevance Overall this is a strong first VR project.
Grade: A-
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